Emmaline Russell
For my final reflection I decided to use my Blizzard Bag blog. In this post I feel that I used exemplary voice. One example is, "If I am reading something (that in my opinon) is boring, it can be torturous." This shows my personality simply becasue it is my opinon. The format of this sentence is not commonly written. More examples of voice in my post is "If a book is too ordinary I ussually toss it." and,"Even though I am very busy I always enjoy kicking back and reading a good book." Too me this is all my voice. It shows my personality because it sounds like something that would naturally come out of my mouth. I'm not trying to sound sophisticated. I'm not trying to impersonate anyone. I'm just writing down my thoughts and opinions.
I decided to use mostly informal diction. That way I could expand my audience because it would be highly comprehendible. However I din't strain away from my love of using a high vocabulary. I included formal diction by using words such as "conventions", "torturous"and, "despise". My sentence structure is all over the place. None of it is consistent. I don't think I have a punctation trade mark either. I would say that most of my diction is abstract. I include lots of characteristics like, "complex", "prejudging", "admire", "despise" and, "controlling". However I also use concrete words such as, 'book", "title", "lacrosse", "school work", "bean bag" and, "chapter". Overall I think I included a lot of different techniques in my blog post.
For my final reflection I decided to use my Blizzard Bag blog. In this post I feel that I used exemplary voice. One example is, "If I am reading something (that in my opinon) is boring, it can be torturous." This shows my personality simply becasue it is my opinon. The format of this sentence is not commonly written. More examples of voice in my post is "If a book is too ordinary I ussually toss it." and,"Even though I am very busy I always enjoy kicking back and reading a good book." Too me this is all my voice. It shows my personality because it sounds like something that would naturally come out of my mouth. I'm not trying to sound sophisticated. I'm not trying to impersonate anyone. I'm just writing down my thoughts and opinions.
I decided to use mostly informal diction. That way I could expand my audience because it would be highly comprehendible. However I din't strain away from my love of using a high vocabulary. I included formal diction by using words such as "conventions", "torturous"and, "despise". My sentence structure is all over the place. None of it is consistent. I don't think I have a punctation trade mark either. I would say that most of my diction is abstract. I include lots of characteristics like, "complex", "prejudging", "admire", "despise" and, "controlling". However I also use concrete words such as, 'book", "title", "lacrosse", "school work", "bean bag" and, "chapter". Overall I think I included a lot of different techniques in my blog post.